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作者: David 日期: 2008.02.01  天氣:  心情:
I have finally found a partner in the game of love,
My true feeling toward her is what I need to prove.
My feeling toward her is unique and extraordinary,
I can’t even find words to describe her beauty in a dictionary.
I will love her the way she deserves in my heart
To me, she is a perfect work of art.
I thought I had find my partner for life,
But what I got is stab by a knife.
I promise not to let my heart be hurt again,
To pursue her, I will feel more pain.
I need someone to show me the way,
So I won’t wonder around from day to day.
God, I pray to you to show me the passageway
Pain and tear is something I’m not willing to pay.
To forget about her is wise thing to do,
Because there are places I need to go.
So long and fair well my perfect match
For now, I can only stay far away and watch.
I will still take care of you when you need
This shall be my lifetime deed.

For some reason I miss you tonight,
Wanting to be your brave knight.
Protecting you through all the scary night.
And you can take care of me after every fight.
I will never let you go and hold you tight,
And you know this is what feels right.
You present next to me is a delight,
Cause in my darkness life you are my light.
You are what everything I have in my sight,
Our future will be nice and bright.
Propose to you this I might,
All I need is for you to say alright.
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作者回覆說[2008-04-29 15:32]:

謝謝. 需要一些批評才能進步

 
時間:2008-02-04 17:16
她, 48歲,台中市,其他
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作者回覆說[2008-02-04 18:38]:

不是連載只是我不想跟不懂的人分享這首詩, 因為這首詩是在講我

 
時間:2008-02-02 22:18
她, 48歲,台中市,其他
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作者回覆說[2008-02-03 06:45]:

謝謝妳的回應. 這是我之前的故事, 不過什麼事都沒發生所以才把這首詩放在這裡. 很高興有人興賞 不過這首詩的結果我還沒放上去



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